Mistake #3 - Weak Linking Words
Using “Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly” in every paragraph produces a mechanical feel.
❌ Example
“Firstly, people eat unhealthy food. Secondly, they lack exercise.”
Technically correct but low-quality cohesion.
🎯 Why Examiners Penalise This
Weak or template linking words = memorised structure.
Examiners want natural, logical continuity.
✅ Band-8 Fix Method: “Semantic Linking”
Use meaning-based connections instead:
“One key factor is the growing availability of fast food. Another contributing issue is the decrease in daily physical activity.”
No explicit connectors needed.
✔ Quick Checklist
- Does the linking word add meaning?
- Could the sentence flow naturally without it?
Continue to: Mistake #4 - Too Many Linking Words
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