Mistake #4 - Too Many Linking Words
Some candidates believe more connectors = higher score.
The result is the opposite.
❌ Example
“Firstly, obesity is increasing. Moreover, additionally, furthermore, people are also eating more sugar.”
Overuse = mechanical = Band-6.
🎯 Why Examiners Penalise This
IELTS specifically warns against:
- mechanical cohesion
- excessive connectors
- forced transitions
✅ Band-8 Fix Method: “Link with Logic, Not Labels”
If the logic is clear, you don’t need many linking words.
“Obesity rates are rising partly because sugary snacks are more affordable than ever.”
✔ Quick Checklist
- Does the connector add clarity?
- Is it repeated too often?
Continue to: Mistake #5 - Ideas Jump Around
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