Mistake #6 - Bad Referencing (this/they/it)

Using pronouns without clear reference creates confusion.

❌ Example

“People are eating more fast food, and this is harmful.”
What is this? Fast food? Eating more? People’s habits?

🎯 Why Examiners Penalise This

Ambiguous referencing = unclear meaning.
Band-8 requires precise anaphoric reference.

✅ Band-8 Fix Method: “Name → Refer”

“People are eating more fast food, and this trend is harmful to their long-term health.”

✔ Quick Checklist

• Does this refer to one clear noun?
• Is the referent close enough?

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