Mistake #6 - Using Vague or Empty Vocabulary

Words like things, aspects, issues, situations are overused and vague.


❌ Example

“There are many aspects causing problems in society.”
Meaning = unclear.


🎯 Why Examiners Penalise This

Vague vocabulary = weak ideas.
Examiners reward specific, concrete wording.


✅ Band-8 Fix Method: “Name the Noun”

“There are several factors contributing to social inequality.”


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Mistake #7 - Wrong Word Form