Coherence Mistake #10 - Overusing Cohesion Devices (Mechanical Feel)
Mistake #10 - Overusing Cohesion Devices (Mechanical Feel) Excessive connectors = robotic writing. ❌ Example “Firstly… Secondly… Thirdly… Additionally… Furthermore… In conclusion…” All in one essay = mechanical = Band-6. 🎯 Why Examiners Penalise This IELTS explicitly states: “Over-use of cohesive devices may make the writing mechanical.” ✅ Band-8 Fix Method: “Implicit Cohesion” Most cohesion should come from: logical sequencing pronoun referencing repetition of key terms parallel structure ✔ Quick Checklist Does each connector add meaning? Can cohesion be achieved without explicit devices? Continue to the next part of the series. ...