IELTSWrite â ã¹ã³ã¢ã¢ãã â ãã£ãšéã ð¥ð
æã¬ãã«ã§IELTSã©ã€ãã£ã³ã°ã®å³æãã£ãŒãããã¯ãååŸããå ¬åŒIELTSãã³ããã£ã¹ã¯ãªãã¿ãŒã«æºæ ããæ£ç¢ºãª0.2ãã³ãå»ã¿ã®ã¹ã³ã¢ãªã³ã°ãå®çŸããŸãã
ãã³ãã¹ã³ã¢å¥ãµã³ãã«ãšãã»ã€
Education - Band 5.5
Original: The education is very important for children. They go to school to learn many things and get good job in future.
Rewritten: A solid education is foundational for a child's development, equipping them with essential knowledge and skills crucial for their future career prospects.
Environment - Band 6.5
Original: Pollution is a big problem in my city. The government should do something to stop factories from throwing waste into rivers.
Rewritten: Urban pollution has become a critical issue in my city. It is imperative that the government implements stricter regulations to prevent industrial facilities from discharging hazardous waste into our waterways.
Technology - Band 7.5
Original: Nowadays, many people use smartphones for everything. This has good and bad effects on our society.
Rewritten: The ubiquitous use of smartphones in contemporary society has brought about both considerable advantages and significant drawbacks, fundamentally altering social interactions and daily routines.
䞊è¡æ¯èŒ
æ¹ååïŒãã³ã6.0ïŒ
The education is very important for children. They go to school to learn many things and get good job in future.
æ¹ååŸïŒãã³ã9.0ïŒ
A solid education is foundational for a child's development, equipping them with essential knowledge and skills crucial for their future career prospects.
æ§ã ãªãããã¯ãã«ããŒ
å®éã®äœéšè«ãå®éã®çµæ
"The AI feedback was a game-changer! I finally understood my grammatical mistakes and how to fix them. My score jumped from 6.0 to 7.5 in just a month."
- Alice W.
"IELTSWrite.me helped me organize my essays better. The side-by-side comparison made it so clear where I needed to improve."