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実際のIELTSエッセイがバンド6.0からバンド9.0へと詳細なフィードバックと書き直しによって改善されました。
バンドスコア別サンプルエッセイ
Education - Band 5.5
Original: The education is very important for children. They go to school to learn many things and get good job in future.
Rewritten: A solid education is foundational for a child's development, equipping them with essential knowledge and skills crucial for their future career prospects.
Environment - Band 6.5
Original: Pollution is a big problem in my city. The government should do something to stop factories from throwing waste into rivers.
Rewritten: Urban pollution has become a critical issue in my city. It is imperative that the government implements stricter regulations to prevent industrial facilities from discharging hazardous waste into our waterways.
Technology - Band 7.5
Original: Nowadays, many people use smartphones for everything. This has good and bad effects on our society.
Rewritten: The ubiquitous use of smartphones in contemporary society has brought about both considerable advantages and significant drawbacks, fundamentally altering social interactions and daily routines.
並行比較
改善前（バンド6.0）
The education is very important for children. They go to school to learn many things and get good job in future.
改善後（バンド9.0）
A solid education is foundational for a child's development, equipping them with essential knowledge and skills crucial for their future career prospects.
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