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Online vs. Traditional Learning
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汇总分数
语法和句子结构
7
词汇丰富程度
6.5
连贯和衔接程度
7
写作任务回应情况
6.5
你一共写了 21 个句子。
这篇作文的精准分数是 6.8。
最关键的 3 个句子让你的分数降低了 0.7 分。
只需修复这 3 个句子，你的作文就能从 6.8 分提升到 7.5。
修复所有 5 个主要问题，有望达到 7.9+ 分。
#1In recent years, online learning has becomes more popular because technology is developing fast. ~0.17'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.2'
语法和句子结构 ~0.3'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.2'
#2Some people think it is the future of education, but others believe traditional classrooms are better. ~0.05'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.2'
#3I think both ways of learning have advantages and disadvantages, and it depends on students' situation and learning style. ~0.15'
语法和句子结构 ~0.2'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.2'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#4People who support online learning say that it is very convenient. ~0.05'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#5Students can study at home and they can choose any courses from many countries. ~0.08'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.2'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
#6Also, it can save time and money because there is no need to travel to school.🎉
#7For example, some people can learn foreign languages online without going to language schools. ~0.05'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.2'
#8Some courses are also available in evenings, so it is flexible for busy students. ~0.15'
语法和句子结构 ~0.3'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#9This way students can learn at their own speed and can repeat lessons if they want. ~0.03'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
#10It also allows students to learn independently without being controlled by teachers. ~0.03'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
#11On the other hand, some people prefer traditional classrooms because it is more effective. ~0.05'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#12In classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly and students can ask question immediately. ~0.27'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.3'
语法和句子结构 ~0.3'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.3'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#13They also can meet friends and this help them to develop social skills. ~0.20'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.2'
语法和句子结构 ~0.2'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.2'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#14Moreover, it is more easier to focus in classroom than at home. ~0.27'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.3'
语法和句子结构 ~0.3'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.3'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#15Some people say online learning may cause distraction. ~0.17'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.2'
语法和句子结构 ~0.2'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#16Classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students. ~0.17'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.2'
语法和句子结构 ~0.2'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#17It can help students to finish work on time and avoid procrastination. ~0.03'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
#18I think online learning is useful but I still prefer classroom learning. ~0.08'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.1'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#19Online learning is flexible but sometimes it is difficult to stay motivated. ~0.08'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#20Classroom learning provides better communication with teachers and friends. ~0.08'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.1'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
#21In general, both types of learning are important, but classroom is better for developing students' skills, understanding, and confidence. ~0.13'
连贯和衔接程度 ~0.1'
词汇丰富程度 ~0.2'
写作任务回应情况 ~0.2'
大致扣分点（仅用作学习改进-非雅思官方评价标准）
+语法和句子结构 ~2'
~0.3
In recent years, online learning has becomes more popular because technology is developing fast.
🖉 'has becomes' is incorrect verb form; correct present perfect form is 'has become'.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Verb form error
In recent years, online learning has become more popular because technology is developing fast.
~0.3
Some courses are also available in evenings, so it is flexible for busy students.
🖉 Missing article before 'evenings'; should be 'in the evenings'.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Article usage
Some courses are also available in the evenings, so it is flexible for busy students.
~0.3
In classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly and students can ask question immediately.
🖉 Missing article before 'classroom' and 'question' should be plural 'questions' or preceded by an article.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Article usage and singular/plural agreement
In the classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly and students can ask questions immediately.
~0.2
They also can meet friends and this help them to develop social skills.
🖉 'this help' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; should be 'this helps'.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Subject-verb agreement
They also can meet friends and this helps them to develop social skills.
~0.3
Moreover, it is more easier to focus in classroom than at home.
🖉 'more easier' is redundant; 'easier' alone is correct. Also missing article before 'classroom'.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Comparative form and article usage
Moreover, it is easier to focus in the classroom than at home.
~0.2
Some people say online learning may cause distraction.
🖉 Countable noun 'distraction' should be plural or preceded by an article: 'distractions' or 'a distraction'.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Countable noun usage
Some people say online learning may cause distractions.
~0.2
Classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students.
🖉 Missing article before 'Classroom'; should be 'The classroom'.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Article usage
The classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students.
~0.2
I think both ways of learning have advantages and disadvantages, and it depends on students' situation and learning style.
🖉 Missing plural form for 'students' situation'; should be 'students' situations' or 'a student's situation'.
😢Grammatical Range & Accuracy - Singular/plural agreement
I think both ways of learning have advantages and disadvantages, and it depends on students' situations and learning styles.
+词汇丰富程度 ~2.5'
~0.2
In recent years, online learning has becomes more popular because technology is developing fast.
🖉 Incorrect verb form 'has becomes' should be 'has become'. This is a word form error affecting lexical accuracy.
😢Lexical Resource - Word form error
In recent years, online learning has become more popular because technology is developing fast.
~0.2
Some people think it is the future of education, but others believe traditional classrooms are better.
🖉 Repetition of the word 'think' and 'believe' in a simple way limits lexical variation; more precise or varied verbs could be used.
😢Lexical Resource - Repetition of words or lack of lexical variation
Some people consider it the future of education, but others argue that traditional classrooms are superior.
~0.2
it depends on students' situation and learning style.
🖉 The phrase 'students' situation' is imprecise and awkward; 'students' individual circumstances' or 'students' needs' would be more natural collocations.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues or unnatural phrasing
it depends on students' individual circumstances and learning style.
~0.1
Students can study at home and they can choose any courses from many countries.
🖉 The phrase 'choose any courses from many countries' is awkward; 'choose courses offered by institutions in many countries' is more natural.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues or unnatural phrasing
Students can study at home and choose courses offered by institutions in many countries.
~0.1
Some courses are also available in evenings, so it is flexible for busy students.
🖉 Missing article before 'evenings' ('in the evenings'); this affects natural phrasing and lexical accuracy.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues or unnatural phrasing
Some courses are also available in the evenings, so it is flexible for busy students.
~0.1
This way students can learn at their own speed and can repeat lessons if they want.
🖉 The phrase 'at their own speed' is less common collocation than 'at their own pace'.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues or unnatural phrasing
This way students can learn at their own pace and can repeat lessons if they want.
~0.1
It also allows students to learn independently without being controlled by teachers.
🖉 The phrase 'being controlled by teachers' sounds awkward and slightly negative; 'guided by teachers' or 'supervised by teachers' would be more appropriate collocations.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues or unnatural phrasing
It also allows students to learn independently without direct supervision by teachers.
~0.3
In classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly and students can ask question immediately.
🖉 Missing article before 'classroom' ('In the classroom'); also, 'ask question' should be plural 'ask questions'.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues and word form errors
In the classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly and students can ask questions immediately.
~0.2
They also can meet friends and this help them to develop social skills.
🖉 'this help' is grammatically incorrect; should be 'this helps'. Also, 'meet friends' is simple and could be improved to 'interact with peers' for lexical sophistication.
😢Lexical Resource - Word form error and lack of lexical variation
They can also interact with peers, and this helps them to develop social skills.
~0.3
Moreover, it is more easier to focus in classroom than at home.
🖉 'more easier' is a redundancy error; 'easier' alone is correct. Also, missing article before 'classroom' ('in the classroom').
😢Lexical Resource - Word form error and collocation issues
Moreover, it is easier to focus in the classroom than at home.
~0.1
Some people say online learning may cause distraction.
🖉 The noun 'distraction' is countable here and should be plural 'distractions' to sound natural.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues
Some people say online learning may cause distractions.
~0.1
Classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students.
🖉 Missing article before 'Classroom' ('The classroom').
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues
The classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students.
~0.1
It can help students to finish work on time and avoid procrastination.
🖉 The phrase 'help students to finish work' is acceptable but 'help students finish work' is more natural collocation.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues
It can help students finish work on time and avoid procrastination.
~0.1
Online learning is flexible but sometimes it is difficult to stay motivated.
🖉 Repetition of 'learning' and 'flexible' without synonyms reduces lexical variety.
😢Lexical Resource - Repetition of words or lack of lexical variation
E-learning offers flexibility, but sometimes it is difficult to stay motivated.
~0.1
Classroom learning provides better communication with teachers and friends.
🖉 Repetition of 'learning' and 'communication' is somewhat basic; 'face-to-face education' or 'traditional education' and 'interaction' could improve lexical resource.
😢Lexical Resource - Repetition of words or lack of lexical variation
Traditional education provides better interaction with teachers and peers.
~0.2
In general, both types of learning are important, but classroom is better for developing students' skills, understanding, and confidence.
🖉 The phrase 'classroom is better' is incomplete; 'the classroom environment' or 'classroom learning' would be more precise. Also, 'understanding' is vague here.
😢Lexical Resource - Collocation issues and imprecise word choice
In general, both types of learning are important, but classroom learning is better for developing students' skills, comprehension, and confidence.
+连贯和衔接程度 ~2'
~0.2
In recent years, online learning has becomes more popular because technology is developing fast.
🖉 The topic sentence is somewhat unfocused because it combines two ideas (popularity of online learning and rapid technology development) without clearly signposting the paragraph's controlling idea.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Point)
In recent years, online learning has become more popular due to rapid technological development.
~0.2
Students can study at home and they can choose any courses from many countries.
🖉 The sentence lacks a clear cohesive device to link the two ideas smoothly, making the connection between studying at home and choosing courses from many countries feel abrupt.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Explain)
Students can study at home, and moreover, they can choose courses from many countries.
~0.2
For example, some people can learn foreign languages online without going to language schools.
🖉 The example is introduced abruptly without a clear link to the previous sentence, weakening the flow within the paragraph.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Example)
For example, this means some people can learn foreign languages online without going to language schools.
~0.3
In classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly and students can ask question immediately.
🖉 The sentence contains unclear referencing and awkward phrasing ('In classroom' should be 'In the classroom'), which affects cohesion and clarity.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Explain)
In the classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly, and students can ask questions immediately.
~0.2
They also can meet friends and this help them to develop social skills.
🖉 The pronoun 'this' is vague and the sentence lacks a cohesive device to clearly link the ideas, causing a slight disruption in flow.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Explain)
They can also meet friends, which helps them to develop social skills.
~0.3
Moreover, it is more easier to focus in classroom than at home.
🖉 The phrase 'more easier' is grammatically incorrect and interrupts cohesion; also, 'in classroom' should be 'in the classroom' for clarity.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Explain)
Moreover, it is easier to focus in the classroom than at home.
~0.2
Some people say online learning may cause distraction.
🖉 This sentence is isolated without a linking device to connect it to the previous idea, causing a slight abruptness in flow.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Explain)
However, some people say online learning may cause distraction.
~0.2
Classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students.
🖉 The sentence lacks a definite article before 'Classroom,' which affects cohesion and clarity.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Explain)
The classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students.
~0.1
I think online learning is useful but I still prefer classroom learning.
🖉 The sentence lacks a cohesive device to link the contrasting ideas smoothly, affecting the logical progression.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Point)
I think online learning is useful, but I still prefer classroom learning.
~0.1
In general, both types of learning are important, but classroom is better for developing students' skills, understanding, and confidence.
🖉 The sentence lacks the definite article before 'classroom,' which weakens cohesion and clarity.
😢Coherence & Cohesion – Logical progression (PEEL: Link)
In general, both types of learning are important, but the classroom is better for developing students' skills, understanding, and confidence.
+写作任务回应情况 ~2.5'
~0.2
I think both ways of learning have advantages and disadvantages, and it depends on students' situation and learning style.
🖉 The position is somewhat vague and does not clearly state a definitive stance on the issue, which weakens the overall task response.
😢Task Response – Unclear position (PEEL: Point)
I believe that while both online and traditional learning have advantages, traditional classrooms offer more comprehensive benefits for most students.
~0.2
People who support online learning say that it is very convenient.
🖉 The idea is mentioned but not properly developed with sufficient explanation or detailed reasoning.
😢Task Response – Underdeveloped idea (PEEL: Explain)
People who support online learning argue that it is very convenient because it allows students to access education anytime and anywhere, fitting their personal schedules.
~0.2
Some courses are also available in evenings, so it is flexible for busy students.
🖉 The example is general and lacks specificity to effectively support the point about flexibility.
😢Task Response – Weak example (PEEL: Example)
For example, many online platforms offer evening courses that enable working professionals to study without interrupting their jobs.
~0.2
On the other hand, some people prefer traditional classrooms because it is more effective.
🖉 The claim that traditional classrooms are more effective is asserted without sufficient explanation or evidence.
😢Task Response – Thin reasoning (PEEL: Explain)
On the other hand, some people prefer traditional classrooms because face-to-face interaction allows for immediate clarification of doubts, which can enhance understanding.
~0.2
In classroom, teachers can explain difficult topics directly and students can ask question immediately.
🖉 The idea is relevant but lacks development and supporting detail to fully explain why this is beneficial.
😢Task Response – Underdeveloped idea (PEEL: Explain)
In classrooms, teachers can explain difficult topics directly, and students can ask questions immediately, which helps to clear misunderstandings quickly.
~0.2
They also can meet friends and this help them to develop social skills.
🖉 The explanation is superficial and does not elaborate on how social skills are developed or why this is important.
😢Task Response – Thin explanation (PEEL: Explain)
They also can meet friends, which helps them develop important social skills such as communication and teamwork.
~0.2
Moreover, it is more easier to focus in classroom than at home.
🖉 The point is asserted without sufficient reasoning or examples to explain why focus is better in classrooms.
😢Task Response – Thin reasoning (PEEL: Explain)
Moreover, it is easier to focus in classrooms than at home because the learning environment is structured and free from common home distractions.
~0.2
Some people say online learning may cause distraction.
🖉 This idea is mentioned but not developed or supported with explanation or examples.
😢Task Response – Underdeveloped idea (PEEL: Explain)
Some people say online learning may cause distraction due to the presence of social media and household interruptions during study time.
~0.2
Classroom also provides more discipline and routine for students.
🖉 The claim is relevant but lacks explanation or examples to clarify how discipline and routine benefit students.
😢Task Response – Thin explanation (PEEL: Explain)
Classrooms also provide more discipline and routine, which help students develop good study habits and time management skills.
~0.2
I think online learning is useful but I still prefer classroom learning.
🖉 The position is stated but not fully justified with clear reasoning or development.
😢Task Response – Underdeveloped position (PEEL: Point/Explain)
I think online learning is useful for its flexibility, but I prefer classroom learning because it offers better interaction and support.
~0.2
Online learning is flexible but sometimes it is difficult to stay motivated.
🖉 The point about motivation is mentioned but not developed or supported with explanation.
😢Task Response – Underdeveloped idea (PEEL: Explain)
Online learning is flexible, but students may find it difficult to stay motivated without direct supervision and peer interaction.
~0.2
Classroom learning provides better communication with teachers and friends.
🖉 The statement is relevant but lacks development or examples to explain why communication is better.
😢Task Response – Underdeveloped idea (PEEL: Explain)
Classroom learning provides better communication with teachers and friends, allowing for immediate feedback and collaborative learning.
~0.2
In general, both types of learning are important, but classroom is better for developing students' skills, understanding, and confidence.
🖉 The conclusion is general and does not clearly link back to the task or reinforce the writer's position strongly.
😢Task Response – Weak link to task (PEEL: Link)
In general, while both types of learning have value, classroom education is more effective for developing students' skills, understanding, and confidence, making it the preferable choice.
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